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This is SUCH a cool concept! You have built such an interesting world here, whilst simultaneously making it really fast-paced. I got really nervous for Dennis when he was talking to Bruce (for some reason, I saw him as a kind of a bad guy). Are you going to write a second part to this? I would absolutely love to read about their 'heroic' date!

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